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Fins and Flippers

Fins and Flippers

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SneverusSnapers By SneverusSnapers Updated Nov 21, 2011

Misfit girl Josie Fletcher turns into a mermaid every night, and she hates it. So when she hears about the great city of Atlantis from a merman who washed up on her local beach  she decides to go and visit. And blow it up if at all possible. Unfortunately for her, it turns out that someone else might just beat her to it. But joining forces with the bad guys is no big deal, right? Until she realises that being on the bad side has its disadvantages...

  • atlantis
  • beach
  • evils
  • fins
  • fishing
  • flippers
  • mermaid
  • mermaids
  • merman
  • merteen
  • ocean
  • prophecy
  • reality
  • sea
  • swim
  • village
skye_wolverine7 skye_wolverine7 Aug 04, 2013
nice opening chapter. i like the cynical and ironic twist right at the beginning of the chapter. nice writing style, but some parts were not very clearly written, but i hope that'll change as u write further.
SwiftieLucy13 SwiftieLucy13 Jul 27, 2013
I still love the Aquamarine reference second time through ^.^
Cantabile Cantabile Feb 19, 2012
Nice opening... Very cynical ^__^
                              I like how your story has a conversational tone to it.. as if she was talking to the reader  :)
mar123hi mar123hi Jan 04, 2012
I lie the bargain of this chapter there is so many story's about perfect people on wattpad the change was nice :)
SneverusSnapers SneverusSnapers Nov 24, 2011
@Cataclysm Yeah, this is defintely not the kind of thing I'm going to settle on. Honestly I don't know why I decided to write about MERMAIDS of all things, well, I suppose it's hard to leash in the inner writing demon trapped inside me...