The Many Faces of Rhea

The Many Faces of Rhea

903 Reads 34 Votes 3 Part Story
Skye Blackley By BlackSkye Updated Nov 13, 2011

Rhea is an assassin- a good one. From one assignment to the next, everything is the same. Untill her latest. Here, in New York, she is sure that things are not as they seem...and someone is watching her, she can feel it.

  • assassin
  • grayson
  • paranormal
  • rhea
  • romance
  • teen
PersonalNarrator PersonalNarrator Sep 28, 2014
For a first story this is is awesome, I just made my first part of a story (also my first time)  and I think its terrible.....
                              but I really like your story!
stinglikabee stinglikabee May 04, 2012
Well written and interesting! Thumbs up!! 
                              Just one thing though; wouldn't he have felt the gun when he messing with her in the lift?
natalyyy09 natalyyy09 May 03, 2012
I like it! it flows really well, there were a few punctuation problems here and there but overall it was pretty good. (also, be careful with tenses, because at times you switched from past tense to present tense. I do it too sometimes so I understand, don't worry.)
Stephfid Stephfid Nov 14, 2011
I agree with  @AemiJules I do like this, I guess this is why I fanned you :)
AemiJules AemiJules Nov 14, 2011
I wouldn't have guessed that this was anyone's first story, it's really good! i like both the concept and the writing.
                              And thank you for the dedication!