Judgement Day

Judgement Day

7.4K Reads 316 Votes 6 Part Story
Velo By Velo-cira Updated May 08

A young rogue named Ash and his mother live on the edge of the clans, which declare all outsiders enemies. This is a story about seeing the flaws in the good, and the justice in the evil. 
A short story based on Erin Hunter's series.

Thank you for reading my story! I really want to show the bad side of the clans, as they're all portrayed as the good people in Warriors. Ash, or Ashwind, has been my character since 2011.  


Suemolly Suemolly Mar 19
OMG I REALLY WANT TO ANIMATE THIS!! (Only if u would give me permission) -3- :''33
TheMelodicCat TheMelodicCat Jun 09, 2016
Ah such beautiful writing! I really like how Ash's mother described the clan cats uvu
ravencryy ravencryy Jul 01, 2016
I love your fanfiction, best one I've read so far. Keep it up, Velo.
I love the chapter and the drawing, they're both amazing and beautiful. Much better than I can do, that's for sure. Hehe.
Sheeptuft Sheeptuft May 08, 2016
This is great! I love it! It's so interesting. :D  (I love your art by the way)
drownedseagull drownedseagull Jun 09, 2016
omg when ash's mom said "but i would much rather be here with you" it reminded me of pearl and steven's interaction in space race, where she tells him she'd rather be on earth with him.