Judgement Day

Judgement Day

7.8K Reads 329 Votes 7 Part Story
Velo By Velo-cira Updated Feb 11

A young rogue named Ash and his mother live on the edge of the clans, which declare all outsiders enemies. This is a story about seeing the flaws in the good, and the justice in the evil. 
A short story based on Erin Hunter's series.

Thank you for reading my story! I really want to show the bad side of the clans, as they're all portrayed as the good people in Warriors. Ash, or Ashwind, has been my character since 2011.  


  • thunderclan
  • warriorcats
  • warriors
Suemolly Suemolly Mar 19, 2017
OMG I REALLY WANT TO ANIMATE THIS!! (Only if u would give me permission) -3- :''33
TheMelodicCat TheMelodicCat Jun 09, 2016
Ah such beautiful writing! I really like how Ash's mother described the clan cats uvu
ravencryy ravencryy Jul 01, 2016
I love your fanfiction, best one I've read so far. Keep it up, Velo.
MarshmallowWarrior12 MarshmallowWarrior12 Jan 07, 2017
I love the chapter and the drawing, they're both amazing and beautiful. Much better than I can do, that's for sure. Hehe.
Sheeptuft Sheeptuft May 08, 2016
This is great! I love it! It's so interesting. :D  (I love your art by the way)
drownedseagull drownedseagull Jun 09, 2016
omg when ash's mom said "but i would much rather be here with you" it reminded me of pearl and steven's interaction in space race, where she tells him she'd rather be on earth with him.