The Red Brick Time Keeper

The Red Brick Time Keeper

181 Reads 8 Votes 2 Part Story
Katie By katiedoodlebug Updated Nov 24, 2011

Charlotte Greys was just your average teenage girl from North Dakota. Or so she thought. 

She ends up in an alleyway hearing a mysterious heartbeat and a new found fear that she is being followed. Then the walls open up to a whole new world. 

Char talks to her past self and discovers things she never knew. Why is she capable of walking through walls to the past, present, and future? She finds out she is a Time Keeper.

Will being a Time Keeper ruin her future? Only she can discover what lies within.

  • again
  • alley
  • brick
  • confused
  • doubles
  • keeper
  • mystery
  • red
  • teen
  • time
katiedoodlebug katiedoodlebug Nov 25, 2011
thank you so much. you wouldn't believe how good it is to hear feedback.
JynxBabe JynxBabe Nov 25, 2011
good again! I just want more added to it, give me more background maybe, idk. Anyway I do like it! keep going! voted!
JynxBabe JynxBabe Nov 25, 2011
This storyline is good, I would go back and add a little more discription and info on the main character...I did like it and I loved your discription of your story! Keep going because with a little work this could be really good! voted!
katiedoodlebug katiedoodlebug Nov 23, 2011
Thank you so much. I really appreciate it, a lot. I will try and upload it this afternoon, so keep your eyes open cause I'm coming.
MRSxXXxMUSTACHIEO MRSxXXxMUSTACHIEO Nov 16, 2011
This is really good up load soon  (P.S. thanks for Dedicating it to meeeeee)