Nanashi

Nanashi

249 Reads 18 Votes 4 Part Story
Emma By iamanemma Updated Jan 22, 2012

In a village where everyone has lovely hair in purples and pinks with eyes to match lived a girl named Nanshi. Tormented and ridiculed for not having their ideals of beauty she has become withdrawn and harsh. Soon her world crashes down and she is taken as a prisoner of the Lyall, a village of wolf men.

  • color
  • fantasy
  • paranormal
iamanemma iamanemma Nov 15, 2011
@blackdeathscythe Yeah I wanted to but she was busy freaking out in her "house" xD
blackdeathscythe blackdeathscythe Nov 15, 2011
You should describe the killing part more, It's too short. And you used the verb 'skirted across' twice. 
                              Over all good job. The beginning really draws you in, and the characters sound interesting.