The first touch..

The first touch..

975 Reads 14 Votes 3 Part Story
trinalautner By trinalautner Updated Dec 09, 2010

In this story, Emily Curtis is in a fatal car accident which kills her parents and her younger sister. She surrives and has no family to turn to. In a care home 500 miles away she moves to a new school and meets a mstyerious boy who has more to his background than ever expected..

TheWoefulOne TheWoefulOne Dec 06, 2010
I like it. It's very sad though. :) But that can be a good thing. Write more! xD I like it so far. 
KAFrak KAFrak Dec 06, 2010
Emily is a murderer 
                              
                              
                              Overall, good writing, nice plot, the rebound needs to be really interesting though
trinalautner trinalautner Dec 04, 2010
@chairsniffa thanks i will soon, it will take me a long time to finish what i hope to achieve!
                              @inmyownworld1 not really no, and you'll se megan!
                              @fatface and i will fatface!xxx
chairsniffa chairsniffa Dec 04, 2010
Woah very powerful story this great job!!!! Its sad but that lends power to the whole dramatic effect !!! Again great stuff and eager for more!!!