The Journey

The Journey

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lexypink By lexypink Updated Dec 02, 2011

Mary has always had a pretty normal life until she figures out that she was adopted so she leaves home to search for her true parents to find out why she has been having weird dreams and visions.While on this search she meets a boy but doesn't know that he plays a big part in her life.What will be the result of her journey.

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mellowpentagram mellowpentagram Nov 29, 2011
um i would suggest leaving better cliff hangers and sticking to format. maybe you shouldn't have introduced the father character so early. but i'm very curious as to why the kitchen is shaking. Please continue.