This isn't love [re writing]

This isn't love [re writing]

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You'll have to guess By mymymyles Updated Nov 13, 2011

Jackie Lane has never believed in love, she's very...harsh when it comes to the subject. But you have to understand she never grew up really knowing the true meaning of love. Her and her best friend stand together in the same beliefs and they both know they will never find love for the simple fact that it just doesn't exist. Then new boys at school come in and tear apart everything she thought she believed was 'love'. Could this be another love story or in the end will Jackie still say "This isn't love!"

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yme123 yme123 Nov 16, 2011
This is great :) interesting philosaphy but at least she can back it up. I think you left out the word isn't in point 2 though. Love this
sweet_nightmare92 sweet_nightmare92 Nov 14, 2011
This is good! I like the idea of your story.. waiting for more! ;))
me229me me229me Nov 13, 2011
Ur story is pretty unique! Good job! I like ur idea and I think u have a very well understanding of ur characters! Good job!
x_abbie x_abbie Nov 13, 2011
You have a really strong story line, Your characters aren't much far off! I really enjoyed reading this,  In some parts i can relate too the emotion you give the characters. It's a really strong piece, which i enjoyed.
EllieTyler562 EllieTyler562 Nov 13, 2011
You have created a very strong image of the main character (Jackie?) and her opinions on "love" I like how the story isn't your normal love story, and the idea of being so against love! Its brilliant! Keep writing!
Zazzyness Zazzyness Nov 13, 2011
Hahaha, this is funny and I like it. =p There a few typos but no big. Can't wait to see what's the next upload. x)