Elemention Warrior: Black Fire Part One

Elemention Warrior: Black Fire Part One

2.6K Reads 37 Votes 16 Part Story
Brian McDaniel By Brianx2012 Updated Oct 03, 2012

Millions of years ago, after the creation of Earth another world is created, Elemental. The world is based upon the seven elements: Lightning, Psychic, Earth, Fire, Spirit, Wind, and Water. These elements produce the energy that flows through the world. The creator of the world, Flin, was no longer able to inhabit the world and therefore no longer able to protect it. In order to keep peace in the world, Flin created seven swords that were to be destined to seven warriors of each generation. As millions of years went by, a new force of evil appeared in the world using the ancient element of Darkness and threatens the very existence of Elemental;The evil dictator Dark William. In order to oppose this force, Flin destined seven warriors of Earth to fight against the evil. Scott along with his friend, Tabitha, both discover a small ruins on Earth where the swords were kept. As they pulled different swords of the elements, they were both warped to the world of Elemental. Scott awakes to find himself on a mysterious world separated from his friends. Upon awaking there he meets a man named Phelocious, the previous leader of the Elemention Warriors, who tells Scott that he is the Elemention warrior of lightning. Scott's destiny was now to reunite with all the other warriors, find the seven crystals of each element in order to break through Dark William's defenses, defeat him, and stop the force of darkness consuming the world of Elemental.

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Dawn_Of_Fire Dawn_Of_Fire Mar 07, 2014
I really like this so far!! And I love that you talked about the original god, Earth's God! Love it!!
AHundredRoses AHundredRoses Sep 14, 2013
hey, uh... No offense please... But its like a summary for the whole story... But it was real nice though!
Brianx2012 Brianx2012 Aug 18, 2012
@ThereAndBackAgain Thank you for your input :) and soon enough the chapter will be shortened. I think the story would be more enjoyable if the audience was given the information little by little over the course of the series. Glad you enjoy :)
Brianx2012 Brianx2012 Aug 18, 2012
@Smilies Haha how coincidental :) it is interesting. He's one of the few characters I actually made up too. Many of the other characters are based off real friends.
Smilies Smilies Aug 18, 2012
@Brianx2012 Okay....so I was reading your summary again....I just realized something really weird. I have a character named Scott in my story as well! Haha. But I haven't introduced him yet. :) Just thought I'd point that out because I found it interesting.
Brianx2012 Brianx2012 Aug 18, 2012
@Smilies Really, I haven't found any cover makers anywhere that would do it for free..that's the reason why I don't have a cover haha and besides I do have a vision for the cover which pulls digital photography out of the possibilities.