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Girl in Pain | {old version}

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Reads 36,367
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Parts 21
Time 2h 18m

amnesia badboy boy broken bullying completed crush death depression drama family girl grieving highschool inkitt loneliness memory mentalhealth nomorebullying numb ocean past sad secrets shortstory

[Winner of The Fiction Awards 2018] 
[2nd place winner of the New Writer's Award]

Sometimes even the purest souls are full of darkness. And sometimes the past haunts its victims until there's nothing left. Sometimes they have to fight against their bullies to survive. But what if this time the girl is not alone?

Copyright 2016-2021 S.O.Simons All rights reserved.

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