Girl in Pain | ✓

Girl in Pain | ✓

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✽ Sιѕѕι ✽ By SOSimons Completed

[Nominated in The Fiction Awards 2018]

Sometimes even the purest soul is full of darkness. And sometimes the past haunts its victims until there's nothing left.
Sometimes they even have to fight against their bullies to survive.
But what if this time the girl is not alone?

Copyright (2016)2017-2018 © S.O.Simons 
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2nd place winner of the New Writer's Award

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Highest rank: #44 in Short Story (24.05.18)
#2 in nomorebullying (22.05.18) | #4 in shortstory (19.05.18) | #1 in sad (21.05.18) | #5 in memory (14.07.18) | #5 in amnesia (15.08.18)

  • amnesia
  • badboy
  • boy
  • broken
  • bullying
  • completed
  • crush
  • death
  • drama
  • family
  • featured
  • girl
  • grieving
  • highschool
  • loneliness
  • memory
  • nomorebullying
  • numb
  • ocean
  • past
  • sad
  • secrets
  • shortstory
  • teen
  • wattys2018
Wow that’s an amazing quote. I really love it. We are holding an awards and your book is eligible to participate if you so choose. Come on down and take a look!
I have a habit of adding specifics like "after half an hour" too. Saying she needed to get to school within four hours in the previous line could open this one up for something more general, like she "got there with time to spare; too much time" sort of thing.
I was drawn in by the title "Girl in Pain", I wasn't entirely expecting a romance... But lets see where this goes!
Minna_A2 Minna_A2 Feb 24
                              I wanted to suggest using ‘dull’ or ‘repetitive’ in place of ‘boring’ just to make it sound a bit better in my opinion, but it’s just a suggestion ^^
I don't really listen to sad songs much😅😅so don't have much idea🙈🙈
lex90210 lex90210 Mar 12
I like it! I like how detailed everything is, and how it really brings you into how the character's feeling.