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Podestaria - Blooming

Podestaria - Blooming

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Rosanna Patruno By RosannaPatruno Updated 9 hours ago

[Book 2 of Podestaria series]

Virginia is not having a good summer. First, the Office for Supernatural Affairs bars her from her dream, then her abusive ex-boyfriend has returned to town - and wants her back. And what does her beloved Biagio do? He leaves her behind and goes on a one year trip.
She thinks things couldn't be worse. Until she has a brush with death. 
Her saviour wants Virginia to pay her debt at once and Virginia just knows he's not revealing the whole truth about her role in an ancient rite. 
There's more at stake than her life and Virginia has to make the ultimate choice - be herself or accept her role as Podestaria. Or can she possibly be both?

linahanson linahanson Sep 01, 2016
What I did like was the cut back to grandma. And you are right - now way will people enjoy this without the other novel! Very clever XD
linahanson linahanson Sep 01, 2016
I need to have a closer look, but maybe you won't like my feedback. I get the impression this is a bit overwritten and rather wordy. Not so much grammar per se but you are getting dangerously close to purple prose... Not sure you wanted to hear that. As I said, I need more peace and quiet...