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Pen Your Pride
My Silent Plea

My Silent Plea

2K Reads 121 Votes 8 Part Story
Brieanne:) By JimaneeCrickett Updated May 02, 2012

What do you do when the one who fought your fears...let theirs take over?

I walked outside and did something I haven’t done in years; I cried. These weren’t normal tears though. They were sobs. My entire body felt like an invisible force was pushing from both sides. My chest burned and I crinkled into a little ball. I couldn’t even stand.  I didn’t cry today because I felt sorry for myself. I cried because I’ve been so naive and stupid my whole life. How could anyone love me? I’m ugly. I’m stupid. There are so many pretty girls out there. So why me?  I was useless. I only caused pain upon people. I am a murderer. I killed the only person who could of loved me. They were right. It didn’t matter that Ray took an interest in me. He probably felt only sorry for me. 
Right then, crinkled into a little ball, in the grass, and right there was when I really gave up on life. They shattered my hope of ever repairing my heart; the one He had broken when he left.

  • andy
  • angel
  • cutter
  • death
  • diffrent
  • disire
  • ellie
  • forever
  • hate
  • hatred
  • hurt
  • hurting
  • longing
  • love
  • mam
  • missing
  • need
  • never
  • ouch
  • pain
  • paul
  • ray
  • silent
DuskValentine DuskValentine Feb 20, 2013
I think your a really talented writer. You have a really good way with words. I enjoy your work a lot. C:
JimaneeCrickett JimaneeCrickett Jan 29, 2012
                              Lolsz.Well first ima just upload the next chapter of The Heart Grows Fonder, but on here I'm waiting for ten votes. I'm almost there(:
LavenderLily LavenderLily Jan 22, 2012
@JimaneeCrickett Honestly, I don't have any yet:) I'll be sure to let you know if I do in the future though :D
JimaneeCrickett JimaneeCrickett Jan 22, 2012
                              The song is on the right, and it's called I cry by Westlife. Its not the best song in the world, but it fits the book perfectly. And I look forward to seeing all of them(:: Lolsz. Your not the only one with bad memory.
JimaneeCrickett JimaneeCrickett Jan 22, 2012
                              Thank you so so much! That makes me so pleased to know that you enjoyed it(: If you don't mind me asking, do you have any Criticism?
LavenderLily LavenderLily Jan 22, 2012
This is incredible. The details are gorgeous, and the sentences so well-written without trying too hard. I wish I could write this beautifully:) The overall plot seems great too, very unique. Excellent piece, excited to read the next few chapters!