1964: Peace & War

1964: Peace & War

247 Reads 10 Votes 2 Part Story
Your Best Nightmare By RollingPinkLedWho Updated Nov 13, 2011

A small town in New York called Phonecia is a quiet peaceful town. An eclectic group of people live together in a sort of commune. They live in peace with good food, good company and love. Meanwhile, in Vietnam the death stricken land is muddy and the dead bodies are decaying. The air is damp as the smell of rain and gun powder fill the air. A group of men trek through the mud...

This is a story that takes place in the late 60's. It is a story of love, peace and happiness as well as a story of hate, war, and tragedy.
Keep in mind that this is not a completed story and I would like your opinions and ideas on how to improve it. Please read and comment! Thank you!

  • 1964
  • 60s
  • death
  • drugs
  • fighting
  • happy
  • hippies
  • love
  • music
  • peace
  • rock
  • roll
  • sad
  • soldiers
  • tragedy
  • war
RollingPinkLedWho RollingPinkLedWho Feb 07, 2012
@Helterskelter Lol, yup! Did ya check out the new part in Chapter One?
Helterskelter Helterskelter Feb 07, 2012
Really insightful and bloody. I love it! Tells the truth about the war. The truth nixion tried to cover up!
RollingPinkLedWho RollingPinkLedWho Nov 30, 2011
Thanks! It's my first story so, I wasn't quite sure how to write it. I just kinda... Winged it... Lol!
Yerdonn Yerdonn Nov 30, 2011
Very interesting. Almost like watching a movie! Really really good.
RollingPinkLedWho RollingPinkLedWho Nov 13, 2011
Thank you! I think that people don't realize how bad war really is. Like my ex is going into the marines next year and thinks it's just going to be fun to shoot guns. Like a real life paint ball game. Boy is he wrong! HE should read this! lol!