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Pen Your Pride
Don't forget to breathe.

Don't forget to breathe.

315 Reads 10 Votes 1 Part Story
Jessica Williams By xZombieChick Updated Nov 13, 2011

Jessica was a nerd, a loner, a nobody. She didn't imagine her high school life like this. She wanted to change, change for the better. She changed her looks and her attitude. She's been threw a lot her teen years. Her mother left her, Why you ask? She doesn't know the exact reason why, But when her father beats her, He always screams, "She left because of you". That's true, But not for the reasons you think. Jessica mother is hiding something, Something she knew Jessica would have to be apart of, Something will happen to Jessica on her 18th birthday, Something that will change her life as she knows It..She has dreams about it every now and then, But she can't seem to understand them, But one day, She will. Very soon..

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SimplisticAlice SimplisticAlice Nov 19, 2011
xZombieChick vert good start for your story. I liked it. Can't wait to read more of it seems like a pretty good story so far.
MsArtemis MsArtemis Nov 17, 2011
This is a good prelude because it gives you a taste of the main character's life as well as see a glimpse of her mysterious future. Nice.
RyanMMeehan RyanMMeehan Nov 15, 2011
This is really good. You having a few typo errors but you have still got some interesting characters.well done.:) voted.:)
kateobabe kateobabe Nov 15, 2011
Hey, i like it. good story line and character. Can i just suggest maybe having somebody edit it because you put lots of capitals in that shouldn't be there, especially after commas and it can just detract from your story! Keep up the good work though :):)
MeleaLove MeleaLove Nov 15, 2011
Well I liked it so far. It is definitely something I haven't seen before. It is original for a story plot like this. Good job(:
Mysterious_Writer Mysterious_Writer Nov 14, 2011
@xZombieChick IKR haha yea i had them open one night for cold air and then i woke up at the night cause my leom tree kept chucking stuff at my window (it does that a lot) and then pair of green eyes were staring and i freakd but i THINK i twas my neighbours cat he has like 4 and a baby one -.-