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A flame in the Storm

A flame in the Storm

20.1K Reads 1.1K Votes 49 Part Story
Andaleeb Zaidi By miraage Completed

Highest rank #16 on 11/12/16
  
  I clutched his leg as he turned to go.
    "You had me enough times that you don't want me anymore" I struggled as the pain didn't allow me to speak; through jagged breaths I whispered "now end it all for once."
    
    He sat and stroking my hair with his hand said in a low voice "Not yet dear".
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    When an innocent crush turns into a lethal mistake, Maria Rasheed is annihilated. She finds her will to live wane but there is a flame inside her which refuses to bow down to the storm that destroyed her life. She is determined to define herself as a victor rather than a victim.

fatima_alfihri fatima_alfihri Sep 16, 2016
It's amazing and I liked so much and ur story has mystery....I loved it........lets see who is that girl.....
vibrancies vibrancies Sep 08, 2016
First of all, I love the names of the characters. Second, I really enjoyed the vague suspense of this prologue. Can't wait to read more!
gappi1902 gappi1902 Sep 07, 2016
This was amazing. The way you've written the prologue, was flawless. I am really loving that you gave us the mystery and how you introduce everything.
SoupsDWord SoupsDWord Aug 03, 2016
This line.... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️........ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
TheFrenchWriter TheFrenchWriter Aug 16, 2016
Nice start, it makes me wonder how this girl is going to react when she wakes up and also what happened to her before. Your description is good and the characters seem well developed. Your words flowed well too. Good job :)
BoluAkins BoluAkins Aug 29, 2016
Hey, I'm from Hooked On Books. I'll be checking your story out for the upcoming reviews :)