His Last 16

His Last 16

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Heartbeatxox By Heartbeatxox Updated Jul 06, 2012

Kara Mckenzie’s brother is in critical condition at Queen Mary’s Hospital and the only person she has to blame is herself. When he hands her a list of 16 things to do before she turns 18, she feels compelled to complete it; if not for herself, then for Harry.
As she moves closer and closer to her 18th birthday, the list becomes smaller yet harder and she puts her life and soul into the list. 
This is His Last 16... And she just has to finish every last one.

  • brother
  • bucket
  • chapter
  • coma
  • fiction
  • friends
  • harry
  • heartbeatxox
  • hospital
  • humor
  • kara
  • last
  • list
  • one
  • party
  • prank
  • sad
  • school
  • sibling
  • sixteen
  • starbucks
  • teen
MegynEmberlynneC MegynEmberlynneC Apr 18, 2012
The list is awesome. Hehehe. This is one of the best stories I've ever read on wattpad. So sad, but a light touch of humour here and there. Love it love it love it xxxxxx
MegynEmberlynneC MegynEmberlynneC Apr 18, 2012
That was SO SAD :(. At least he didn't die. Ahh how did he get like that? What happened? Great story. And I loved the little cliffhanger at the end <3 great job xxxxx
meeko228 meeko228 Mar 13, 2012
awwwwwwwww at first i was like WAIT HE CAN'T DIE!  But he's alive for now, so that's good. :)
ElizabethAnneBlacke ElizabethAnneBlacke Feb 20, 2012
I love this story, it is so sad. I hope her brother gets better and now you have me hooked because I want to see if he does.
                              Dreamer96
samjam71194 samjam71194 Jan 29, 2012
HAHA. THIS IS SO FUNNY, LOL. "Harry Style" made me think of Harry Styles. xD Just thought you should know. ;D
barbie23 barbie23 Jan 27, 2012
Awww this is sad, it makes think of my brother, and my other siblings....:(