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Shannon By smoran93 Updated Dec 07, 2011

Elizabeth's parents are newly divorced, her mother is looking for a fresh start closer to family and moves her and Elizabeth to a new village in the middle of nowhere. Things begin to happen in this secluded place, some teens don't leave their homes till dark and some can do strange things that Elizabeth does not understand, until some things begin to happen to her. Then the humans come. Then theyre the hunted.

LovelyylevoL LovelyylevoL Dec 29, 2011
I like this. Your character's are very believable and the story line is addictive. Keep writing :D
smoran93 smoran93 Dec 13, 2010
@Cookiie yeah I notice the spelling when I read it after but I havent had the time to edit lol ill sort it out ;) and get through the study guide you can do it lol GOOD LUCK are you doing GCSE's or something xx
                              @issymarsh thanks so much :D xxxx
smoran93 smoran93 Dec 13, 2010
@Cookiie  haha yeah same when I was a lot younger and im glad you got that from it :) xxx
issymarsh issymarsh Dec 13, 2010
well done with the discritption, i could imagen myself in her shoes, its very well written :) xx
kirstvamplover kirstvamplover Dec 13, 2010
like it <3 really well written, there are a couple of mistakes but you dont really notice them xx (Y)
vampirelover93 vampirelover93 Dec 12, 2010
you describe things really well, it's like im there, haha that sounds so cheesy xx