Only Just A Dream. Chapter 1

Only Just A Dream. Chapter 1

164 Reads 16 Votes 2 Part Story
Ce'ce is da name By Heyimajellybean Updated Nov 28, 2011

Roxy is just your average 14 year old girl. Like every other 14 year old Roxy has a dream, her dream is to be an actress, and when a famous Hollywood director comes to her school its her biggest chance, but when her Brother mysteriously dissapears and her mum is very ill, will Roxy's dreams be shattered.....

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RedFeather RedFeather Nov 14, 2011
High five for using my cover!
                              Do you mind dedicating a chapter to me? Thanks! You're so awesome!
NoMe12 NoMe12 Nov 13, 2011
Soo this just needs a bit more description. But its pretty good. I feel like with a bit of work this can be an interesting story :)
Heyimajellybean Heyimajellybean Nov 13, 2011
@AngelsLie101 thank you, that has really helped
                              @Rearea1998 Thank you. Yeah Lol :)
                              @LoLiin123 Thanks :)
                              @LadyHollie Yeah that was a mistake :S, Ok thanks and I will :)
                              @lucyVF Ok thanks, I will try and remember that!
Rearea1998 Rearea1998 Nov 13, 2011
I think it needs a bit more discribtion so I know what the character look like but the comment about Justin Beiber made me smile haha anyways I think if u just add some more detail the story would be even better than it already is
Heyimajellybean Heyimajellybean Nov 12, 2011
@wheres-gezza Thanks, and thanks for the advice :)
                              @whoarey0u Thats weird Lol
                              @emala101 Ok, I'll do less dialog thanks
                              @yme123 Try and remember that, thats the one thing I forget Lol
                              @emilystars1001 thanks, I will :)
                              @Cejay120 thanks :)
Cejay120 Cejay120 Nov 12, 2011
i would suggest adding detail but besides that its good. will read when next update. :)