Without you (On hold)

Without you (On hold)

316 Reads 16 Votes 5 Part Story
ReadMeSomemore By ReadMeSomemore Updated Feb 27, 2012

Will was almost like any other man, he had a girlfriend wanted to start a family, needed to earn his money. But unlike other men Will had a very different job. And when you try and have two separate lives not only you but everyone else can become in danger. What will he do when Lizzie finds out about everything.........Have a read and find out Much Love ReadMeSomemore xx

rperna176 rperna176 Feb 08, 2012
This seems so sad, but it's a great start!
                              
                              Instead of "guiltiness", just use "guilt"!
ReadMeSomemore ReadMeSomemore Dec 03, 2011
@Chasing_Silhouettes I'm glad you like it and I hope you read more! :D
ReadMeSomemore ReadMeSomemore Dec 03, 2011
@KingLeonidas Thanks for reading it and it is suppose to be short, it's just something to make the reader think 'oh my god, what happened'. Its more of just a shock thing.
                              But thanks for the vote and comment! :D
AVYofficial AVYofficial Dec 03, 2011
Good start, just edit it a bit and it will be awesome!
                              Just try to make it a bit longer. :)
ReadMeSomemore ReadMeSomemore Nov 13, 2011
@WondrousDreams Ahhhhh thanks.......you are soooo helpful, i really appreciate it. I will try and sort out everything you have said :D
                              Thanks for reading and i hope you enjoy the book.
                              Much Love ReadMeSomemore X
ReadMeSomemore ReadMeSomemore Nov 13, 2011
Oh right......ummm what were they, then i can correct them!
                              Oh and thanks for reading :D