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Bleeding Heart Yard

Bleeding Heart Yard

164 Reads 4 Votes 1 Part Story
Annathea By Annathea Completed

My friend challenged me to pick up a book, ready first sentence I see and make it an opening line to my story. The book was "The Boleyn Inheritance" and this is the result. 
The events in this story are true, lady Elisabeth Hatton was murdered in Bleeding Heart Yard in 1626 at the end of the ball. Some believed she was a witch and was taken by the devil. 
This place still exists. 
Although I'm sure that none of pere Dumas characters attended this ball...

  • england
  • murder
  • musketeers
  • romance
bmill170 bmill170 Nov 14, 2011
I think the general storyine is quite good. Your description is good however if you were to expand on what happened. Has she killed before, when did her and Elizabeths relationship go so wrong. how long have she and the count been together etc