Unspoken

Unspoken

56.3K Reads 990 Votes 43 Part Story
Jackie Silva By JackieSilva77 Completed

Very slow and random updates - sorry.  What happens when everything you know about yourself and your life is wrong? How would you react if you discovered your an animal? Everything in Cici's life is changing and she's in danger. Will she be able to protect herself? Or will she cave under pressure?  Cover by: Summer Sturtz a/k/a love_laugh_music

  • action
  • adventure
  • fantasy
  • fiction
  • non-teen
  • paranormal
  • romance
  • suspense
  • teen
  • thriller
Senrab Senrab Feb 20, 2013
A good start to a good story. I'm looking forward to reading more.
liliancarmine liliancarmine Jan 25, 2012
@JackieSilva77 ah, much better! I can totally see a brother saying those lines! ;)
JackieSilva77 JackieSilva77 Jan 24, 2012
@liliancarmine its ok I reread it and changed it to another cocky version of the same thing. Now he says "Like the new me?" & "Again, Like the new improved me?" I think that fits better with Joel. What do you think?
liliancarmine liliancarmine Jan 24, 2012
@liliancarmine oh, I just read that brother line was intended because of your brother, so scratch what I said! lol! Xx
JackieSilva77 JackieSilva77 Dec 10, 2011
@blackjack__X LOL not going to be a butt at all, I really appreciate your taking the time to comment.  I will keep that all in mind when I start editing.  Thank you.  @Epaige94 Not upset at all, I respect your opinion.  Thank you for commenting and once again, I will keep that all in mind.
JackieSilva77 JackieSilva77 Dec 10, 2011
@23_cherry_23 Thank you for pointing out the tense changes...I had originally written in past tense but then rewrote in present tense so tried to edit but just fixed so thanks again...