A Gem And Her Protector

A Gem And Her Protector

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NeverShoutFall By NeverShoutFall Updated Nov 14, 2011

Avery Anson is a Gem ,a person with powers, when her mother dies her step dad starts to abuse her. One day she can't take it anymore and she stands up for herself. In result he kicks her out, but Avery welcomes this and with her Protector, Jessalyn, she leaves what she use to call home for Crest View Private School. Where she makes new friends and embraces her new life style. Soon she is told something about her that makes her stand out against the Gems and finds herself being chased by Hunters. A group that kills mythical creatures.  Will she escape?

parametric parametric Nov 20, 2011
Another great chapter. I'd say to try and tackle emotions more to balance your good descriptions. Hope you write more soon because it's going somewhere good.