The Green Rising

The Green Rising

58.2K Reads 2.5K Votes 45 Part Story
SomewhatDistracted By SomewhatDistracted Completed

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Action / Mystery / Thriller  / General Fiction

Feeling that victory may elude him, one of history's most notorious figures implements a contingency plan in the months before his death. Decades later, Lily Goodwyn believes that the Order of the Father Church is a weird cult that is bent on forcing its will upon everyone. She isn't prepared for how right she may be.

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  • coup
  • cult
  • death
  • drama
  • family
  • generalfiction
  • government
  • housewife
  • massacre
  • murder
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  • wprh
  • wwii
Ryan_Penney Ryan_Penney May 30, 2016
I LOVE THE GAMBLER! Just read the intro, seems very good, has certainly peaked my interest.
ed2wfu ed2wfu Nov 21, 2015
Full of imagination and creativity. There is both tension and suspense. There's not much if anything I would change. Lines were well written.
HelenGraul HelenGraul Apr 05, 2015
Oh my goodness!! You have definitely captured my attention!! I will read more later on as I am a senior in assisted living and need to go down to breakfast.
                              Outstanding beginning!!!! Outstanding job!!!! :) :D
shalonsims shalonsims Mar 28, 2015
@katayoku_no_tori @SomewhatDistracted
                              
                              yeah, I agree that the flashback scene threw me off a bit too. I had to reread as I didn't understand the change in tense.
verysunshine verysunshine Feb 11, 2015
While the other prolouge was good, this one is more interesting. I like how your narrator, Lily, breaks from the trend of being a teenager. The writing is powerful and well-paced.
Smotherworldly Smotherworldly Jan 19, 2015
OH? Violent scenes? GO ON.
                              And I'll have you know, I'm the master at finding and pointing out minutia (except in my own work). It seems to be a good thing and a bad thing depending on who you ask.