50,000

50,000

319 Reads 32 Votes 1 Part Story
C.K. By CKsback Completed

Those were some mighty fine wings.

  • 50000
  • angel
  • fiction
  • girl
  • man
  • short
  • story
  • struggle
needsmoresleepwrites needsmoresleepwrites Apr 03, 2012
wow, this was just great! :) the detail was great, just the type to keep me reading and interested and how it all played out...i really didn't expect this. Fantastic!
juliaxxx juliaxxx Nov 15, 2011
i thought he was a good guy! :( anyways its a good story! especially how when you read the story the second time even though the words are the same it will give you a different impression, like double meaning... if you know what i mean :)
xZombieChick xZombieChick Nov 15, 2011
Very interesting, though I'm not sure if i really just read what I think I read O_o; Did he cut her wings off? That's sad :( I hope shes's okay, but great story so far ;D I'm really impressed with all the detail and such. I voted.
rune101 rune101 Nov 15, 2011
I like how it was written - plenty of imagery and such vivid wording. The angel described beautifully as well.
rainbowsplinters rainbowsplinters Nov 15, 2011
oh wow! this is really good, i love the way you twisted it at the end. i would have never guessed he would have done that, even though i noticed there were one or two hints throughout the piece.
                              
                              well done! xx
rain-kissed_midnight rain-kissed_midnight Nov 15, 2011
This is incredible in the way you were able to do awesome description to the story. The way you made the story play out was absolutely beautiful and I envy the way you were able to do that so well. One of the best short stories I've read in a long time. Excellent job.
                              
                              XOXO
                              ~Midnight.