I Heart You

I Heart You

7.8K Reads 458 Votes 14 Part Story
JLeepy By JLeepy Updated Oct 21, 2012

Joey Taylors is your average 16 year old teenage girl and she's best friends with Jason Walker. He's rich, good-looking and charming.  Everything she's not.    But the thing is: He likes her but she doesn't know it.  Things goes even more out of hand when the sexy and mysterious Luke Evans, the guy who stole Joey's first kiss when she was ten comes to town, Joey finds herself stuck between these two boys.   But something is bothering her as they seem to be hiding a secret from her.   What is it that they don't want her to find out? And who does her heart truly belong to?

  • childhood
  • friends
  • friendship
  • heart
  • kiss
  • love
  • mates
  • romance
Lovely143 Lovely143 Sep 21, 2012
I love Jase. He seems like a really cool dude haha (: awesome chap btw
FallenSnowflake FallenSnowflake Aug 25, 2012
I like the modernization of this story. Realistic interactions between your cast and wonderful plot development. However, the dialogue needs editing. A lot of periods need to be converted into commas.
Melody_Lee Melody_Lee Aug 25, 2012
Not bad for a first chapter...added to my library. Excited to read another chap...:)
Melody_Lee Melody_Lee Aug 25, 2012
Can't wait to start reading. The description grabs my attention. I like this kind of story. :)
janixdrighteous janixdrighteous Aug 25, 2012
yey.. i think where will be this story goes but i'll read the next chapter to know.. haha i like the title.. :) good job keep it up.. :)
omg_poptarts omg_poptarts Aug 25, 2012
girl with changing eyes xD funny :)
                              
                              i like the dude he was all...the chicks were hot bruh......and stuff >.> lol. i do think your book is interesting..imma read another chapter lol