Under the Influence

Under the Influence

18 Part Story 33.9K Reads 1.3K Votes
Nadz By nadzii1234 Updated Jul 01, 2012

Isabelle Hoarde is a bad girl, she never really did care about school and education. When her principal has had enough of her, he sends her to Greg Jefford, the school nerd.
    
    As she spends time with him, she starts to  open up. Something in which she is afraid to but she can't explain herself when she is around him and frankly it scares her. 
    
    Past memories are reinforced causing Isabelle and Greg to stick together but could it be too late; could she be too far gone? Could Isabelle uncover the secret that is Greg Jefford?
    
    Find out as you read "Under The Influence."
    
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SparksFly1 SparksFly1 Jul 02, 2012 12:39PM
This is good so far and you portray Isabelle's rebellious character well. Should be interesting to see what is going to go down between her and Greg over the story!
                                    
                                    Great stuff-Keep up the good work :)
Wow this is really great, she seems like the usual badass student but I feel suspense for something coming. Your descriptions and supporting information was wonderful. Thanks for great read, voted.
nadzii1234 nadzii1234 Jul 02, 2012 10:15AM
@Beautiful_Liar Yeah I know it's cliche- that's because it's my first story but now I'm thinking if was to make it different :)
nadzii1234 nadzii1234 Jul 02, 2012 10:13AM
@Thingstosay  the spacing is only like that because this was the edited version. Once I complete this entire story, I'll fix up the layout of the story. Thanks :)
SincerelyJune SincerelyJune Jul 01, 2012 04:51PM
This was a good first chapter, you hooked me into the story from the start, and good descriptions. Also don't space too much, and try to make this story your own because the story line is somewhat cliche.
MAD5683 MAD5683 May 29, 2012 02:48PM
oh wow I love Isabelle's attitude!So cool and badass!Voted!and btw the writing was great too.Flows really well.On a second thought I'll add it to my library!Awesome job!