My story is called The Loveless Alpha and the Pup It's about an alpha who finds A rouge child on his pack lands she has been abused and needs some to take care of her it wait he doesn't have a mate and he has never wanted a children.
I read the some of the summary like this "and needs some milk" lol
I think he was able to smell her mother on her maybe her mother is his mate
I hate to be one of these people but I think that I should correct you. The correct phrase is "...couldn't care less". A lot of people write it the way you did but if you think about it, the phrase doesn't make seen then. It would imply that they actually do care
it is an interesting start, but As has been said, it would benefit from gaps in the paragraphs, it makes it easier to read
Thanks so much I hope you will continue to read
@Perez1992 ahh ok that explains it, the story is really good so far.