The Loveless Alpha and the Pup

The Loveless Alpha and the Pup

49.8K Reads 1.7K Votes 6 Part Story
Miranda By Perez1992 Updated Aug 01, 2013

My story is called The Loveless Alpha and the Pup It's about an alpha who finds A rouge child on his pack lands she has been abused and needs some to take care of her it wait he doesn't have a mate and he has never wanted a children.

JuliannaM11 JuliannaM11 Jun 03
I read the some of the summary like this "and needs some milk" lol
ReniitaWare ReniitaWare Oct 09
I think he was able to smell her mother on her maybe her mother is his mate
sophj_428 sophj_428 May 25, 2015
I hate to be one of these people but I think that I should correct you. The correct phrase is "...couldn't care less". A lot of people write it the way you did but if you think about it, the phrase doesn't make seen then. It would imply that they actually do care
Pitkus_Nyburus Pitkus_Nyburus Jul 24, 2013
it is an interesting start, but As has been said, it would benefit from gaps in the paragraphs, it makes it easier to read
Perez1992 Perez1992 Jul 23, 2013
T@PonytailedAvenger  
                              Thanks so much I hope you will continue to read
PonytailedAvenger PonytailedAvenger Jul 23, 2013
@Perez1992 ahh ok that explains it, the story is really good so far.