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Beautiful Rogue

Beautiful Rogue

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jules By writingcrazed Updated Apr 05

Forced into a life she never wanted, Irina Kavalier finds herself in a whole new world unbeknownst to her for the last fifteen years of her life. 
The world of the Savage Rogues.
When it's kill or be killed, what other choice does she have?

ibrorschach ibrorschach May 07, 2016
I don't remember you writing a werewolf themed story on AFF though or like something that has the world Elysian in it 😂
ZahrinaHaitamin ZahrinaHaitamin May 07, 2016
I ws about to write the same as the comment above but i only started following u recently from V story hehe. But ill be waiting patiently hehe
cineris cineris Jun 27, 2016
In the first sentence: the phrase is really beautiful, but then the "is what" makes the sentence as a whole feel awkward and almost try hard. Maybe replace it with something like "has."  Or something to make it feel a bit more natural and flow smoother
cineris cineris Jun 27, 2016
I hope I'm not being too critical because I really do like this. That's why I want to help a bit, because there's tons of potential and it feels like you've put a lot of thought and effort into wording and writing quality in general