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hi_its_me By hi_its_me Updated Jul 03, 2012

On her 5th birthday, Keisha's dad was found dead in his study. Months of investigating and all they knew was that he just dropped dead for no reason. After officials deliver this dreadful news, she starts having vivid nightmares of her fathers death. Different points of view, her father's, the killer's, a bystander's. Each brings a new horror. She finally makes an oath to never sleep alone again. Only her mother doesn't know about these dreams and becomes questionable to Keisha. One night she gets a glimpse of something that is defiantly going to help her, only somebody doesn’t want her to tell.

karebear17 karebear17 Dec 21, 2010
i was only a little confused on certain parts like her age and the speediness of your piece.
karebear17 karebear17 Dec 21, 2010
are you kidding me that was awesome. your friends are totally right. i defiantly want to reads more.... i fanned and voted for you...cuz you rock
Juliebee_Summers Juliebee_Summers Dec 08, 2010
@AuroraRush What she meant was that on her fifth birthday everything changed and she is remembering it as a 15 year old. At least that's my understanding O_o
Juliebee_Summers Juliebee_Summers Dec 08, 2010
Is this the edited version cuz I swear I edited it? Oh and if you need anything else edited then email me, and I'm on it! :P
Kaspar Kaspar Dec 07, 2010
Awesome, I like your use of adjectives. You should edit a little better, though. It was great, nevertheless.
AuroraRush AuroraRush Dec 05, 2010
Just wanted to ask... before I read on... "on her 5th birthday 14 year old Keisha"??? Uhm... "_" Am I missing something??? Okay, I'll finish reading now =}