A perfect punishment - Major Editing

A perfect punishment - Major Editing

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EGGsterminate_WHO By EGGsterminate_WHO Updated Nov 12, 2012

Major editing - seriously do not read

Hi, this was written 7 years ago when I was 11/12 years old, a time I did not understand the basics of English grammar, evidently. I'm thinking about rewriting this but I'm not really sure. I left a note on chapter 1 so if you do somehow click this book then look over there. I also left the chapters as they are so people can have a bit of a laugh haha.

  • 101
  • badgrammar
  • crystal
  • laugh
  • perfect
  • punishments
  • rewrite