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A perfect punishment - Major Editing

A perfect punishment - Major Editing

35.3K Reads 168 Votes 5 Part Story
EGGsterminate_WHO By EGGsterminate_WHO Updated Nov 12, 2012

Major editing - seriously do not read

alicegrimleyevans alicegrimleyevans Mar 28, 2013
Loving it so far but I think you should have checked your maths equation before she wrote that she is good at maths as she would actually have to wait 2 hours and 27 ( not 37) minutes
HayleyMonroe HayleyMonroe May 28, 2012
i like her attitude towards her parents...i like it...and i'd read it when i'm free from my homework maybe near 5:00 hope you don't mind. :) i noticed some more errors but i wouldn't point them...cuz you might think i'm annoying hehe... :) good job by the way.
EGGsterminate_WHO EGGsterminate_WHO Feb 10, 2012
@KBilicious Thanks! I'll improve it!:) But right now i'm writing my other story called a perfect punishment.
EGGsterminate_WHO EGGsterminate_WHO Jan 01, 2012
@KaylaSeverusSnapeWil Thanks!
                              I really appretiate it a hell lot!!!!
Saz-shuga Saz-shuga Nov 11, 2011
Reallly gooood.. ur inspiring me sis.
                              but you dop ahfve some grammer problems
                              please upload the next chaoter ASAP