Major editing - seriously do not read
Loving it so far but I think you should have checked your maths equation before she wrote that she is good at maths as she would actually have to wait 2 hours and 27 ( not 37) minutes
i like her attitude towards her parents...i like it...and i'd read it when i'm free from my homework maybe near 5:00 hope you don't mind. :) i noticed some more errors but i wouldn't point them...cuz you might think i'm annoying hehe... :) good job by the way.
@KBilicious Thanks! I'll improve it!:) But right now i'm writing my other story called a perfect punishment.
I really appretiate it a hell lot!!!!
Reallly gooood.. ur inspiring me sis.
but you dop ahfve some grammer problems
please upload the next chaoter ASAP