Masks (boyxboy)

Masks (boyxboy)

83.3K Reads 4.6K Votes 46 Part Story
Charlie By Charliewrites0 Updated Jun 13, 2017

Lucas arrives home and shuts himself in his room. No word or explanation, only silence.

His worried mother decides to call an old friend of his in the hopes that he will help break the silence, but Edward Black has troubles of his own: his innocence and solitude among them.

It's all about uncovering masks and shattering reflections.


Author's Note:

I don't usually write A/N in the book, so I want to take the time now to say thank you for reading, voting and commenting. 

Thank you for pointing out any mistakes (which I will gladly correct) and for motivating me to be better and better.

Thanks to everyone who helped me vote for a cover, you are the greatest ;D

***Mature content ahead: 
Descriptions of violence, drug and alcohol abuse, depression, anxiety, self harm and sexual content, among others***

***Other triggers may include: mentions of religious beliefs, illness, psychopathic behavior, among others.***

Love always,


  • angst
  • anxiety
  • bisexual
  • boyxboy
  • bxb
  • depression
  • freethelgbt
  • gay
  • guyxguy
  • lgbt
  • love
  • malexmale
  • manxman
  • mature
  • mxm
  • romance
  • secrets
  • teenfiction
  • youngadult
- - Jul 01, 2017
hm. interesting opening, gives the reader something to think about it.
mAdb00x mAdb00x Nov 28, 2016
Descriptive!! I can totally imagine what the characters are doing. The emotions of each character are very evident because of how you  describe their individual feelings.
ravewriter ravewriter Dec 11, 2016
KeriHalfacre KeriHalfacre Nov 22, 2016
This paragraph suffers a little from what I like to call 'passive catch up syndrome'. The smidgen of passive voice makes it feel like I have to catch up to what's happening to the scene. I've noticed it's very common at the beginning of books.
denzei49 denzei49 Nov 27, 2016
You have a very good foundation. Base from me of course.
                              The way you have written this chapters open up to a lot of possibility that can happen to this story.
                              With those back stories, readers will surely be intrigue to find out what's happen next.
KeriHalfacre KeriHalfacre Nov 22, 2016
Some nice hints at the conflict of the book, both with Blair and with the Black Manor. I found it kind of comical how Lucas declares himself a grown man considering how juvenile he's acting at the moment. I give him the benefit of the doubt.