Where The Trail Ends

Where The Trail Ends

7.7K Reads 445 Votes 20 Part Story
Jasmine Marie By MiladyCelina Completed

Eudora was looking forward to starting a new life in California, it was the land of promise. After her parents died she joined the wagon train west with her best friend Abigail and her family. When Eudora get's hurt and is left behind with little Robert they strive to catch back up with the wagon train only to find there to be nothing left. Now they only have each other to rely on. Will they make it to their destination?

I really like the names you picked for your characters, and the style you write in is very personal. It drags me right into her point of view and frame of mind. There was also a good flow of emotion in the piece, making me sad in some areas, giggle in others. I look forward to more!
LadyRosabella LadyRosabella Oct 05, 2013
Very nice. It seems like this chapter is developing more of Eudora's character. Robert is pretty cute. 'Boring adult things' lol
LadyRosabella LadyRosabella Jul 22, 2013
Great beginning! This story really grabs up your heart and soul! Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see where Abby and Eudora's journey leads them. ;)