Innocence is overrated

Innocence is overrated

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chantelsworld By chantelsworld Updated Sep 06, 2011

Being alone in the world can be a good thing; the silence, the peace, the serenity. Its one of the undermined gifts of the world - solidity. Being alone allows you to restore your sanity, but it is only when the world invades when we think loneliness is a crime. The world devours your innocence and it is then when we crave peace. You need to be broken before you can be fixed...naked before you can be clothed. How loud do we have to scream for someone to hear? How damaged do we have to be before someone helps us?

chantelsworld chantelsworld May 22, 2011
@xRandomBubblez @WakaXflakaXlola23 thanks guys 
                              @AphroditeKid thankyou so much 
                              @SMSReader i know right...i suppose idiots make the world more interesting lol xo
chantelsworld chantelsworld May 20, 2011
@CanWePretend i know..but what would the world be like without a few assholes? haha
                              
                              @whoopee_dolphin thankyou :) much appreciated xo
whoopee_dolphin whoopee_dolphin May 20, 2011
it's good-you go right into the story to engage your reader. I like it! 
chantelsworld chantelsworld May 20, 2011
@marshmallowgotswag  thankyou..like my protagonist, i dont like to waste time lol 
                              
                              @Ladyly  thankyou :) gosh making me blush
                              @foxifae thanks for the feed-back, much appreciated.. but i see what you mean. I'll keep that in mind for my next chapter 
                              @Monica4242 @xoxorandomgirl5  THANKS GUYS
marshmallowgotswag marshmallowgotswag May 19, 2011
I love how you just dive into detail with it, it may seem like short but it's captivating :D voted 
chantelsworld chantelsworld May 18, 2011
@beachside thankyou. simplicity is always a winner lol. aww making me blush behind the comfort of my computer screen lol... i know this one was the shortest chapter because it just came to me, but thanks for the feedback..it made me smile :) xo