naruto the neglected

naruto the neglected

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kiya namikaze By fairydemon666 Updated Jul 17

this is a rewrite of my book that i and some others think was way too rushed so if you read this then don't bother reading the other. or if you read the other one don't bother reading this. this might be longer and have more detail and extra stuff but practice the same thing.

gibson1014 gibson1014 Aug 06
It takes a true God of shinobi to just walk up to the most feared thing on earth and ask if it wants to play cards with him lol
                               #HiruzunIsKamiNoShinobi
Capitilization?????????
                              Not a really big deal but it can be a little irritating.
Holy_Fox306 Holy_Fox306 Jul 04
Ha I can't believe how you made it sound so simple when he's talking to a freaking demon I congratulate you
gibson1014 gibson1014 Aug 06
Only the Kami no Shinobi is brave enough to ask a force of destruction to play card with him
I really hope I can read this book. It's hurting my head a bit seeing no line change when diff people are speaking