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The Torture of Longlost Love

The Torture of Longlost Love

12.3K Reads 154 Votes 24 Part Story
Nina Dorsa By MachineChick Updated Mar 04, 2011

Tara knows that she has a gift of living forever but she is about to discover something that she always had but never knew, Her beloved lion boy Ben  returns and as they try resume their lives together something takes a dramatic turn, and things go from being perfect to disastrous .

RedPandaKat RedPandaKat Jan 15, 2011
Sounds good!A bit confusing but I'm sure you will elaborate in later chapters.I really like the descriptions! XD
T_W_T_X T_W_T_X Jan 08, 2011
i absalutly luuuuuuuuuuv it !!!!!!!
                              do continue !!!!!!!! pwetty pwetty pweez
labyrinthe labyrinthe Jan 06, 2011
except for some grammatical errors you're off to a decent start.
midnightfume midnightfume Dec 31, 2010
Um. Well the beginning was really good. The story is not so much my style thou and at times the wording got a little strange. But I can see others liking it. Keep it up :)
MissMeg4n MissMeg4n Dec 23, 2010
I LOVE TEEN FICTION BOOKS!!! So, I am like, in love with this book XD anyways, there is a book called Immortal (not on here) and I love it so much!! I read it like, seven hundred times...haha....anyways, keep up the good work!!
MachineChick MachineChick Dec 20, 2010
@SmileMyLove Yeh soz i'm a really bad editor i will go through everything and fix it  =)