From nerd to badass

From nerd to badass

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OversizedDevil By OversizedDevel Updated Nov 06, 2017

"I'm in front of my house
The lights are on
I'm screwed 

I get the courage to walk in and...

BOOM"


Let's rewind here...
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Maddie- the girl who's mum died when she was 10, she has a 4 year old baby sister who is all innocent. She doesn't know about all of the abuse. Maddies 17 years old. So when she turns eighteen she gets the right to adopt sister. Then leave. She has a fighter style kind of personality, stubborn, smart, brave, strong, and lovable. 

Lucy is adopted by the way

James- a bad boy, who's had the mid perfect life. Parents were divorced and he's been treated like crap as a kid. And his 5 year old sister has been treated like an angel. 

Ally- maddies best friend and knows about the abuse. She does anything she can- without being found out by her father- to help maddie. She's a girlie girl. Red hair and colored eyes. The opposite of maddie

What happens when they run into each other in the mall? What will happen? Will James find out about the abuse?

Used to be 'nerd to badass'

         Discontinued

  • abuse
  • badass
  • completelycliche
  • love
  • music
  • romance
  • rrbz
  • teen
  • wattys2017
KandyLuvsReading KandyLuvsReading Oct 25, 2017
I feel u girl, When I do guy P.O.V I be like... "So do guys talk to there friends like 'WHATDUP MAH DUDE' Or a simple hi?"
- - Jun 30, 2017
Bruh same. Especially during the holidays. Because everyone has a fake smile as if they like it when in side most want it to end, so they can shop for themselves.
Silkeyjr_23 Silkeyjr_23 Feb 01
My older brothers act this way ALL of them and there is 7 of them
kinda_insane12 kinda_insane12 Feb 09, 2017
And last thing!! ITS FREAT SO FARR. And be a little more clear with a bit more detail and slow down the writing. Ur making the story go too fast as u said. So maybe add a bit more detail 😊
kinda_insane12 kinda_insane12 Feb 09, 2017
It's constructive criticism and I'm just trying to help 😄😄😋
kinda_insane12 kinda_insane12 Feb 09, 2017
Also dot jump from one POV to another so fast, it gets confusing