From nerd to badass

From nerd to badass

89.4K Reads 3.1K Votes 40 Part Story
OversizedDevil By OversizedDevel Updated Jul 26

"I'm in front of my house
The lights are on
I'm screwed 

I get the courage to walk in and...

BOOM"


Let's rewind here...
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Maddie- the girl who's mum died when she was 10, she has a 4 year old baby sister who is all innocent. She doesn't know about all of the abuse. Maddies 17 years old. So when she turns eighteen she gets the right to adopt sister. Then leave. She has a fighter style kind of personality, stubborn, smart, brave, strong, and lovable. 

Lucy is adopted btw

James- a bad boy,who's had the mid perfect life. Parents were divorced and he's been treated like crap as a kid. And his 5 year old sister has been treated like an angel. 

Ally- maddies best friend and knows about the abuse. She does anything she can- without being found out by her father- to help maddie. She's a girlie girl. Red hair and colored eyes. The opposite of maddie

What happens when they run into each other in the mall? What will happen? Will James find out about the abuse?

Used to be 'nerd to badass'

- - Jun 30
Bruh same. Especially during the holidays. Because everyone has a fake smile as if they like it when in side most want it to end, so they can shop for themselves.
And last thing!! ITS FREAT SO FARR. And be a little more clear with a bit more detail and slow down the writing. Ur making the story go too fast as u said. So maybe add a bit more detail 😊
It's constructive criticism and I'm just trying to help 😄😄😋
Also dot jump from one POV to another so fast, it gets confusing
- - Feb 23
You could really use a prologue to give some background on the first chapter
sassyfriends122 sassyfriends122 Dec 27, 2016
Omg the mall sometimes is cool because sometimes  u see famouse people last time i when to ontario mall and i saw well i forgot his name well the one who says deez nuts not lying o swear to god i smiled  so bad