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Soup By VVSoup Updated Jun 27

The greatest mistake vampires ever made was letting us believe in them.
    England, 1887. All vampires have been enslaved. Kept in silver chains, they live in eternal pain to serve their human masters.
    This is the world Sarah Veil must make her way in. A child of immigrants, and a hatred of being touched, Sarah grew up knowing that she was different.
    Neither of these things are helpful when she is expected to marry into British society and secure the empire her father had built. And with a legacy built on the suffering of others, and the pull of an unthinkable love, Sarah isn't sure what she wants anymore.

Ha!  ew.  I can tell she'll be *such* a pleasure to be around.
*applauds*  I could easily believe that to be some long-winded rules and regulations document (granted, about vampires)  from the 1800s.  The language matches very well!  I'm afraid if I tried to imitate something like that, it would end up sounding very modern and informal XD
PriyankaAkhil PriyankaAkhil Dec 30, 2016
Loved faintest ink......I absolutely can't wait to read the sequel....your writing is really gripping..I bet Touch is as good too.....😙😙
I feel like some fragments can just be combined.
                              "Piana tuning perhaps or basket weaving."
                              Just a personal opinion. Nothing really to take on board if you don't agree.
sangolover1 sangolover1 May 03, 2016
Loved Faintest Ink! Can't wait for the sequel 😍 I guess I'll just have to have my fix by reading this.
Is the first sentence an incomplete sentence? It read really awkwardly.