The hunter becomes the hunted. ( BxM )

The hunter becomes the hunted. ( BxM )

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KillerKinng c; By -SicklySweet- Updated May 18

Hayden Le Bow is a hunter , he finally turned seventeen.  That means he can finally hunt with his sister Eden. Hayden knows the first hunt is special. He's heard others hunters brag about it for years. Hayden meets Alister on the hunt and things changed.

He didn't count on a vampire saving his life.
He didn't count on becoming a vampire, Or his dead mother being alive.
He certainly didn't count on the hunter becoming the hunted.

Merry599 Merry599 Sep 24
I don't know if there are more mistakes, bit I know that at least the vos is wrong, it should be something like te or tu, but I'm not certain which of the two is correct, it's the same mistake as in the French sentence, vos is plural.
Merry599 Merry599 Sep 24
Votre should be ta, so: faire bien sur ta chasse.
                              Votre is plural, while ta is singular.