MINE, and MINE only.

MINE, and MINE only.

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Lieke By Liekay Completed

When two worlds meet,
    and collide
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    A Dutch civil engineer student, on a internship in NY. What happens when she decides to have a one night stand, and he turns out to be the soon-to-be Alpha of the biggest and strongest pack out there in America. Not only did she sleep with him, she's his mate. 
    
    And he will stop at nothing to make her his. Because she is his, and only his. 
    
    What happens when a normal human being is thrown into the world of packs, werewolves and stuff like that. And her world suddenly isn't as innocent as she thought it was.
    
    Follow how the story of Lotte and Oliver develops, will a one night stand turn into something more, or will Lotte run away. Afraid of him, the most feared and baddest Alpha leader, Oliver Hunt. 
    
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  After having talked for about another half an hour we're finally done. I pick up the newspaper, and I start reading it without looking at the front page picture. 
  James O'Donnell new love interest? Who is this mystery girl. 
  James is always at it a total player, I look up at the picture of James and his 'mystery girl'. A loud growl erupts my throat, you can see James sitting at a table in a restaurant in a romantic setting, with his hand on the mystery girl's hand. And sitting opposite James is the so called 'mystery girl' 
  Lotte Heide 
  I throw everything around in my office that I can get my hands on, there are holes in the wall everywhere, and here I am sitting admits the rampage, with bloody and a glass off whiskey. 
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    Updates every weekend.
    strong language

Robinrocks99 Robinrocks99 Aug 02, 2016
Well, you have a few gramatical errors however nothing overly offensive. You seem to be literate I would just like to remind you that anything in quotations must have punctuation before the quotations mark.
                              For example:
                              Sarah cried quietly as she muttered, "Perhaps it just wasn't meant to be."
Azusasama Azusasama Aug 25, 2016
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS ALREADY. a very nice introductory but you should edit it.
StorywriteramI StorywriteramI Jul 30, 2016
We're is we are! There doesn't need to be another are in the sentence!
Robinrocks99 Robinrocks99 Aug 02, 2016
I believe you meant to put floor becuase flour is for baking a cake