Four-Eyes

Four-Eyes

876 Reads 19 Votes 7 Part Story
Bartimaeus By Bartimaeus Updated Mar 23, 2012

This tells the story of a legendary elven warrior; a genius that mastered the 3 sacred arts of Shock, Fist to Fist and Reverse Daggers. No elf had previously mastered even one of the sacred arts. The warrior was banished into the mountain at a young age, it seems that his genius was too much for him and he became... slightly unstable.

-vinca- -vinca- Jul 07, 2011
Huh, two-legged reptiles? Are they something like dinosaurs who walk on back legs. Or really with just two legs. Nah, that would be too weird.
                              But now I have an image of a snake like creature with two small front legs stuck in my mind. O_o
-vinca- -vinca- Jul 07, 2011
Okay, I'm finally starting to read this story. Again. And just as promised, I'll leave some comments.
purplegirl14 purplegirl14 Feb 07, 2011
It's really good. But why do you randomly repeat words or phrases?
-vinca- -vinca- Dec 26, 2009
I like it. It's weird but interesting at the same time. I just don't get Cearings behaviour. Isn't he supposed to be really smart, intelligent, why is he doing things like that?