Broken Promises;

Broken Promises;

788 Reads 16 Votes 3 Part Story
Amiina By Onestarr Updated Jan 05, 2011

With her mother dying as a victim of cancer when she was just 4, and getting sent to foster care, Hayley Adams has a lot to handle, but at the age of 15 she gets adopted by the commander of the navy, this is when she thinks her life will turn around for the best, but things arent always as they seem right?

tauralicious tauralicious Dec 01, 2010
you've got to write more... its really good. the way you've written i felt like i was reading a novel by a great writer! 
                              
                              you have my vote and i'd love to read more of it
                              
                              tauralicious 
HumeraaStarh HumeraaStarh Nov 06, 2010
Aminaaaaa! Yurr Story Was Reeeli Guwdd....Carry On Writing =)