best friends brother? hahaha no ....maybe?

best friends brother? hahaha no ....maybe?

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Natasha By TashaRawr Updated Oct 20, 2012

what would you do if you were in love with your best friends brother?

_CRMNH _CRMNH Apr 17, 2012
This is good, but your missing alot of punctuation here. Just be wary of that. C:
mars12345 mars12345 Mar 23, 2012
Also when switching points of veiw, let us know for example
                              
                              *Bobs POV*
                              blah blah blah
                              
                              *Marks POV*
mars12345 mars12345 Mar 23, 2012
you need to use more details. Also like memoires said, Dont use text talk.
AgentGalini AgentGalini Feb 07, 2012
The plot seems nice, but you should totally take an editor...
TashaRawr TashaRawr Jan 14, 2012
@Up_in_the_sky the problem is i dont have a computer so its all hand writen and when i get a chance to i put it up here so its pretty hard lol. i will try harded and thanks
sk8erchic8911 sk8erchic8911 Dec 19, 2011
If you need an editor, I would be more than happy to edit your stories for you...That way it may be easier to understand. :)