His Majesty's Personal Maid

His Majesty's Personal Maid

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Elizabeth By Scattered_Roses Updated Aug 14, 2016

Maria Rosario was your average maid who worked in the Royal's Kingdom. With the 'No magic practice' rule in order no one was allowed to practice their magic except the royals and the military. But listening to that rule didn't fit well with Maria, so every chance she got she broke that rule. Everything was fine and dandy until His Majesty discovered her using magic. And that's where it all begins with one condition in trade for the chance of a life time.

marvlet40 marvlet40 Jun 11, 2016
I love this story it has potential . Looking forward to  reading it .
RLizzy RLizzy Jul 02, 2014
You might want to recheck this. What you have typed in Greek is actually pronounced dianemoun.  Sorry, I know it's not that important but thought you should know. μετεωρίζομαι is the correct Greek, not transliterated or translated, for levitate.
- - Oct 16, 2012
I can't wait to see what happens next here, this looks so good. Also, I have to comment on how beautiful the cover is!
Scattered_Roses Scattered_Roses Jul 15, 2012
@DelianaAllen @algreen1212 Thank you very much for the critique! I will start fixing these things! It's a great help! I appreciate it!
Scattered_Roses Scattered_Roses Jul 13, 2012
@BookNerd305 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the big words! :D
BookNerd305 BookNerd305 Jul 13, 2012
The description is.. okay. Not bad though. I hardly read like these types of stories, more like romance and crap -->lol. But i love the cover for this book. Also big props for using big words :D I like big words! Alot of good detail, keep going love :) <3
                              
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