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The Rejected Luna

The Rejected Luna

191K Reads 7.1K Votes 23 Part Story
iPeace By darkenedoath Updated Nov 28, 2016

Rejection is a funny thing. The males never feel hurt but they always come back. But... This isn't a fairytale now, is it?
"I, Cameron Darren, reject Laurette James as my mate." Cameron said, smirking.

Laurette stood there, in shock, trying to realize what just happened.

bllurrytown bllurrytown Mar 15
i can edit if you don't have the time, but it's coo if you don't want me to xo
Funs1z3d Funs1z3d Nov 03, 2016
what have you done laurette? THE QUESTION IS WHAT HAVE YOU DONE CAMERON???? ...... gosh get it right. jk
jhazminedonuts jhazminedonuts Nov 01, 2016
Your book is great but i didnt really like third pov sorry no offense
shittasticFUCK5 shittasticFUCK5 Nov 06, 2016
I don't really like the 3rd POV. And the story moves on way too quick, and its missing details.
The writing could be better but the general plot and structure is amazing!
alaura_rukh alaura_rukh Nov 25, 2016
It's too soon to be rejected. That's what I think. But ok I guess... I'm just going to continue reading