Divaradia - Part 1: Fairytale (EDITING)

Divaradia - Part 1: Fairytale (EDITING)

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Darkmoonhorses By Darkmoonhorses Completed

There are 4 girls, each wields one of 4 elements. But Queen Elidor has been killed, and her evil Brother King Rosforth has taken the throne. He has killed Meredith's parents, and she and her three friends Lily, Megan and Sian must embark on an adventure to avenge Meredith's parents and to find a new ruler for Fairytale.

GreekStarGazer GreekStarGazer Feb 04, 2011
Pretty awesome! Love the detail that you put in. My only thought was that it's a bit hard to read when you type it such as when one person is talking they say
                              "(insert quote here)."
                              "(insert another quote here)"
                              but its the same person. I find that confusing. 
                              Over all very good!
lostguitarpick lostguitarpick Dec 06, 2010
@Darkmoonhorses Honestly babe, you'd recognize me eventually. This is my NaNo username, I thought I told you that. Sooner or later you'd recognize my stories and poetry too ;)
Darkmoonhorses Darkmoonhorses Dec 06, 2010
@lostguitarpick if i didn't know who u were, i would have been flattered! but alas, *sigh* you had to tell me ur username via email! i sight at u, darlin'!
lostguitarpick lostguitarpick Dec 05, 2010
<3 I luvs unicorns! Sian reminds me of another friend of mine, as for Megan...we'll see...
lostguitarpick lostguitarpick Dec 05, 2010
I really enjoyed reading this <3 Lily seems like such a quirky character and Meredith seems so sweet. They both remind me of friends of mine. I love it!
Darkmoonhorses Darkmoonhorses Dec 03, 2010
this is just my first story guys, so lemme know whatcha think!