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The Salvatore Diaries

The Salvatore Diaries

751 Reads 21 Votes 2 Part Story
miley246 By miley246 Updated Dec 04, 2010

Well, I tried hating this story. Why doesn't a hater get a chance? Damon's a hater and EVERYBODY loves him. This is my fanfic. It is both a season and book review.PLEASE,if you don't watch VD, I have a full review...ha. Ha. Ha.
P.S: I am not Drakula

miley246 miley246 Dec 31, 2010
                              wow.thanks alot.yeah,i'll upload soon but right now,i'm kinda having writer's block but it wil be ready by sunday.:P
KamariaAelfgar9 KamariaAelfgar9 Dec 31, 2010
Love it(: how you describe the way the character's thoughts would play out in a certain scene. Update soon please
BlondFangs BlondFangs Dec 08, 2010
Again your writing is very good but lacks paragraphs; each new thought or subject should trigger the start of a new one. At the moment yours  are much too long and this makes the chapter badly structured. That aside I did like the description and your choice of words. X 
BlondFangs BlondFangs Dec 08, 2010
Awesome. Needs paragraphs but that aside it's very well writen.