On the Falling | #Wattys2016  [On Hold]

On the Falling | #Wattys2016 [On Hold]

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WillowNRoses By WillowNRoses Updated Oct 05

Falling in love doesn't change the fundamental nature of both parties. It doesn't matter that purity gets dirtied or that feelings soon become reckless tales that we use to soothe the lonely hearts. It didn't change the fact that he was still a man of many secrets and I, a concealed daredevil that didn't know how to be wise. Aaron Rozanski was Aaron Rozanski, and Jane Sorel was Jane Sorel. Our story was never in realizing that we needed each other,  but in finding that only those who hope, can dream of love. 



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Note to my readers: Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. I hope that you will also enjoy the songs as they really add to how I feel about my characters. Please feel free to comment and don't forget to vote if you liked the story!

SoupsDWord SoupsDWord Jul 12
Woooooooooow. You completely drew me in. Great writing style. I found only a few grammar mistakes here and there but apart from that it's perfect :)
Phenomenally done.  The writing flows so perfectly and the plot building is done at just the right speed. I absolutely love your work so far and can't wait to read on
lillyqueeen lillyqueeen Jul 17
This was a well written and thought out chapter. It was beautifully written which flowed and grasped the readers attention. Can't wait to read on!
I love your writing style. It is so like - the published works out there. Didn't spot any grammatical errors whatsoever. I also like the flow and the vocie of the story. It is really intriguing. So, kudos! Look forward to reading more.
- - May 31
Oh no, not the minions! Anything but the bloodthirsty minions! O.o
ishaa17011 ishaa17011 Jul 12
It was a great start. U described the characters in a very good way. N it really binds me to read further. Reading this .. it sounds like u r already an established author. Best of luck