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Louise O By CheeseLouise1 Updated Dec 10, 2010

When Allison Parker dies, she wanders, not knowing what to do and no one seems to be able to see her but when she starts giving up hope, a mysterious boy seems to acknowledge her presence. She then learns that she has to complete a task before she can leave the world.

PrestonTerry PrestonTerry Aug 20, 2016
I am so Loving it😀😀😁😁💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
xoxmusicxloverxox xoxmusicxloverxox Dec 25, 2010
:O just realised I hadn't voted for your story! (I have now so...yeah) anyway GREAT start! :D <3
ashantefaith ashantefaith Dec 08, 2010
this is really good!
                              And you should defiantly continue!
                              im really interested to see how this turns out, please update soon : )
Pinkcarrot Pinkcarrot Dec 07, 2010
Brilliant so far, keep up the good work, looking forward to reading more :)
CheeseLouise1 CheeseLouise1 Dec 07, 2010
@brightstar94 Thanks for the help :D im gonna try and change it now into something that makes sense, hopefully :D
                               : )
ErikaChristovich ErikaChristovich Dec 06, 2010
If she has brain damage, she's still alive.  Cause of death (as described) would be blunt force trauma.  If the blow to the head was deadly, there would be much less blood loss (no heart beat to pump it out).